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Slipping in and out of consciousness I writhe in excruciating pain. Steely fingers kneed my stomach: digging, clawing and I feel as though my insides are being shredded. It’s torrid then frigid then torrid again and the sweat slithers down my brow as if to escape the agony of the heat from whence it came. Then comes the undeniable and urgent need to push, with what? How? This doesn’t seem to matter as I bear down with every fiber of my being, all my strength, the pain rushing through my frame. Ripping, tearing but I’m so close, I’ve almost finished what began only fourteen hours ago. Blood gushing, the moment has arrived, and as they place him in my arms all I feel is relief.
©2008-2009 *aphrodite87
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:iconjaws43:
Ouch!

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The retirement rate for arsonists has gone up with soaring gas prices!
:icondavidbollinger71:
amazing how u wrapped that upand tied it all together in the end. i was with u by then
:iconplungergirl:
I really love this! Great writing. I agree with the previous guy, about how you finished it.

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I'm like a superhero, but without any powers or motivation.
:iconmiguellewis1992:
I'll never look at child birth the same again.Great essay!

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"You don't really know someone until you fight them."

- Seraph (The Matrix Reloaded)

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